I think this story is so engaging that children can read it to the end. 9 points, I would recommend this storybook to others. The story is simple and easy to understand. Some areas could be improved such as adding button feedback.
The story background matches the theme, the text reading is fascinating, the rich color of the text gives me a good sense of experience, and the hue of the background makes me very interested
This story is very interesting, but it is a bit short, and it can tell more about the difficulties encountered by small animals on the way to the starry sky
I think the story is lighthearted and interesting, the only downside is that it lacks some ups and downs, and the protagonist achieves the goal too easily
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I think this story is so engaging that children can read it to the end. 9 points, I would recommend this storybook to others. The story is simple and easy to understand. Some areas could be improved such as adding button feedback.
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The story background matches the theme, the text reading is fascinating, the rich color of the text gives me a good sense of experience, and the hue of the background makes me very interested
This story is very interesting, but it is a bit short, and it can tell more about the difficulties encountered by small animals on the way to the starry sky
8 points
I think the story is lighthearted and interesting, the only downside is that it lacks some ups and downs, and the protagonist achieves the goal too easily
Do you think the story is interesting enough to entice kids to watch it in its entirety?
I think the story is interesting enough to keep kids engaged until the end of the story.